Anyway, these are my improvements.
From This: http://xs125.xs.to/xs125/08105/dogpromo3…
To this: http://xs125.xs.to/xs125/08112/quickflie…
And This:
http://xs125.xs.to/xs125/08112/dogad22sa…
Any comments, critique, etc?
Thank you!
Why Is Dog Training The Best Thing We Can Do For Our Dogs?
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I would put more emphasis on the training...people want to know all the benefits they can get...The last one is best, but I think it could still be better. As a trainer myself...I would not take you as a professional in the training department...you want them to know they can learn more from you than a doggie handbook. Maybe something like.."want to walk your dog instead of your dog walking you?" Want your dog to listen when you say 'lay down' or something like that...You have to touch on the common problems people have with their dog. No hard feelings just trying to help. Good luck!
Three Common Dog Training Methods to Avoid
- these signs look alright..
give more color to them!
use "dog" words... like acronyms or something. - cute, more color please
and are you a certified trainer, if so, you will need to put that in your ad...people will ask you, but let them know first.
they may not respond if you do not put certified trainer.
and they will ask how many years have you been a trainer and how many dogs have you trained.
be prepared
Breeder/show/handler 15 yrs.
a certified trainer, does not advertise to walk dogs, they train...make the signs stand out..
are you an experienced dog walker.....let the signs ring out for you, let the signs work for you, not against you.
good luck - Someone wants a job to train your Dog. Cheaply.
- The last one is very good. It is colourful, and has pictures, and looks friendly (if you know what I mean).
Maybe some more details about what exactly you do (what courses, how you do it, your methods, experience, etc) would be good.
Other than that, well done! = )
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